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雅思口语实例评析:高分来自少犯错误(下)

2008-01-11 00:25
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12个考生的雅思口语考试实例评析

第一个问题——几乎是100%要问的雅思口语题:What do you do?

考生1:I'm a studen(t).

点评:发音问题:受粤语发音习惯的影响,广东考生经常吞掉一个单词的尾音,比如把student发成studen,把like发成lie,把tired发成tire,把job发成jo(考官会莫明其妙好半天:我明明让他谈JOB(工作),他为什么要谈JAW(下巴)? )

问一句,答一句,像挤牙膏。

考生2:I'm a studen(t).I studied in Guangzhou University. My major is accounting. I very li(k)e my major,because it's an interesting major.I sing(think) I can fin(d) a goo(d) jaw(job) with it.(考官纳闷:“我唱歌,我觉得我能找到个好下巴?”)

点评:理解题目:考官问的是你是干什么的?只需要回答你是学生,在哪里上学即可;干嘛还要说是否喜欢专业?这样回答,犹如考官挤了一下牙膏,哗啦出了小半管。

发音:几乎每个句子都有发音错误,刚好符合5分的评价标准:大概听得懂,但是经常犯错误。

语法:刚说完I AM,我现在是个学生,马上说I STUDIED,我原来在大学读书,非常明显的“不自觉”语法错误。何况,还有从初中说到现在的I VERY LIKE……

流利但不连贯,刚说完专业很有趣,却接着说我觉得能找到好工作,逻辑不连贯。

考生3:I'm a student.I'm doing my Bachelor's Degree in accounting.点评:简洁全面,最简单安全的回答。

第二个问题——一个考生熟悉的闲聊话题:Do you like reading?

考生1:Yes,I (very) like reading.

点评:紧张导致语法错误,考官立刻扣分!

考生2:Yes,I do!(面带微笑)

点评:虽有挤牙膏嫌疑,但表情有期待下一个提问的感觉,考试得以愉快地进行。

考生3:Yes,I do!I read a lot!

点评:虽然只多说了一句话,但是体现出了交流的愿望,考官比较喜欢。

考生4:Yes,I do!I read a lot!I often read newspapers,because newspapers have,have the most important,the most useful,useful informations,you know,and……

点评:又犯了一挤牙膏小半管的错误,考官问你是否喜欢读书,先说喜欢,再说喜欢读报纸,再说为什么喜欢读报纸,则开始逐渐偏离主题了。

不敢果断扣题,乃是大忌!即使偏离主题,只要果断大声扣题:So,I like reading a lot!回答就给人一种完整感!

考生5:Yes,Ido!I like reading,because reading gives me lots of knowledge,and information.So,I like reading!

点评:中规中矩,没有什么错误,最多可以获得7的评分。

切题依然不够精确,最精确的切题是“我喜欢读书,我喜欢到什么程度”;而不是迅速地去回答“我喜欢,因为……”

考生6:Yes,I do!I love reading,it's the most important part of my life!I have quite a large collection of books.

点评:好答案,直击8分!回答的结构很清晰:喜欢读+喜欢到什么程度+证明我的喜欢!用词稍嫌“平凡”。

考生7:Yes,I do!My life would be dead boring without the company of books.(稍微停留一秒钟,如果考官饶有兴致地在听,则继续说)Speaking of company,I remember that my girlfriend once got really mad at me because I spent too much time reading,and she said:“Books,or me,you choose!”You know what I said?I said,“Both,dear,you know that!"Hehe,I think you can feel how much I love reading from this story.

点评:9分答案登场!用词漂亮,加分!切题,加分!使用了虚拟的语法,加分!幽默,加分!根据考官的表情判断是否该继续说下去,有互动,严重加分!

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