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【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】教育类真题7分范文二(2/2)

教育类真题

【Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more schoolwork. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 】

啦啦啦这是文章的第二部分。

书中的原文是同学回忆的文章,有一些语法错误。

而音频中的文章是Pat老师修改过后的,修正错误的同时运用了更多的同义替换和华丽句式,所以根据修改版的提供原文哦。

童鞋们听写的时候要注意连读哈。

另:如果花线错误欢迎留言告诉小编哟~

学习愉快喵。O(∩_∩)O~

 

Despite all these considerations, I believe that students should be given enough freedom in deciding how to use their spare time for the fundamental reason that the skill of managing their time is as important as reading books or doing exercises. Specifically, providing students with the right to choose what they do after class will develop their sense of responsibility and build their confidence which are the root of any success. So I think students should be given appropriate guidance about how to use their free time. Although this free time not necessarily has to be spent on schoolwork.

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