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文章意思上很清楚，不会令阅读者有疑问。

注意题目大写实词首字母My Best Friend

大小写和标点都要注意。

I have a best friend named zhu jie who is a beautiful girl .
- My best friend Zhu Jie is a a beautiful girl.

we grew up together.  大写首字母

we often discussed who we wanted to be or what dream we would have.
- We often discuss who we want to be or what dream we would have.

She told me she would go to Japan to see cherry blomssoms. So when she graduated from (the) university she went to a university in Japan for postgraduate study to learn (研究型的学习要用study) Animation Production (不需要大写) major（major可以去掉，不影响句意）.

now she is a art teacher in a local college. I hope we can happy everydag.
- She is an art teacher in a local college now. I hopw we can be happy every day.

注意基础，如大小写，标点，冠词，拼写。

学习愉快！