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四级写作技巧及高分模板

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四级写作技巧

四级写作共一题,所占分数比例为15%,考试时间30分钟。写作选用考生所熟悉的题材,考生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、一句话、图画或图表等,写出一篇120~180词的短文。写作要求表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。

4大作文类型及高分模板

1. 现象阐释型

 

这类作文多为提纲式作文或图表式作文。这类命题要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释,分析产生该现象的原因并加以评论。

写作模式:

第一段描述现象;

第二段解释这种现象产生或存在的原因;

第三段提出解决问题的建议或总结观点。

高分模板:

① Nowadays/Recently, ______.

② As a result/Thus,   ______.

③ There are various reasons accounting/responsible for ______.

④ For one thing, ______.

⑤ For another,   ______.

⑥ In addition, ______.

⑦ As far as I am concerned, ______.

⑧ On the one hand,   ______.

⑨ On the other hand, ______.

⑩ In a word,   ______.

①   开门见山,描述现象。

②   说明该现象造成的结果或影响。

③   承上启下,表明产生上述现象的原因是多方面的。

④⑤⑥   具体分析产生上述现象的各种原因。

⑦   表明自己的态度和看法。

⑧⑨   提出解决问题的方法。

⑩   得出结论,总结全文。

2. 对比选择型

这类作文多为提纲式作文,议论文体裁。通常首先论述相反的两种观点,或分析某一社会现象的优缺点,然后提出自己的看法。

写作模式:

第一段提出要讨论的主题,说明人们对此看法不一;

第二段分别论述人们对此事物或现象的看法及原因;

第三段表明自己的观点并给出理由。

高分模板:

① Nowadays, there is a hot debate on ______.

② As for such a question, different people hold different views.

③ Some people believe that ______ mainly because ______.

④ While others argue that ______.

⑤ For instance, ______.  

⑥ As for me, I am in favor of ______.

⑦ For one thing, ______.

⑧ For another, ______.

①   提出要讨论的话题。

②   点明人们对该话题存在不同观点。

③   指出一些人的看法及原因。

④   指出另一些人的观点。

⑤   举例论证另一些人的观点。

⑥   表明自己的观点。

⑦⑧   分析支持自己观点的理由。

3. 观点论证型

这类作文多为提纲式议论文或看图作文,通常是围绕某一事物或观点进行论证,有时以某个热点话题或某种现象为议论对象,要求考生提出自己的看法或观点,并提供论据加以论证,也可在文章最后给出建议或期望。

写作模式:

第一段引出话题,表明观点;

第二段给出论据,阐释观点;

第三段提出建议,重申观点。

高分模板:

① During recent years, ______ has aroused wide/considerable public   attention.

② Undoubtedly,/There is no doubt that ______.

③ As we all know, ______ play(s) an important role in ______.

④ For one thing, ______.

⑤ For another,   ______.

⑥ Meanwhile, ______.

⑦ Considering the above situation, measures should be taken to   ______.

⑧ First of all/In the first place, ______.

⑨ Furthermore, ______.

⑩ Only in this way   can we ______.

①   开门见山,引出话题。

②   肯定该事物存在的意义,然后再表明自己的观点。

③   承接上文,叙述该事物的重要性。

④⑤⑥   列举论据,证明观点。

⑦   承接前文,提出自己的建议。

⑧⑨   指出应该采取的措施。

⑩   重申自己的观点,总结全文。

4. 问题解决型

这类作文一般为提纲式作文,且多为议论文。通常首先提出一个有待解决的问题,然后要求考生就该问题给出解决方法。

写作模式:

第一段描述现象,提出问题;

第二段分析问题可能产生的后果;

第三段给出解决问题的方法或建议。

高分模板:

① It is beyond reproach that ______.

② However, it may   go too far to ______.

③ It is not unusual to witness that ______.

④ Consequently, ______.

⑤ What’s worse,   ______.

⑥ Therefore, it is high time that we took actions to ______.

⑦ In my opinion, on the one hand, ______.

⑧ On the other hand, ______.

⑨ In addition,   ______.

⑩ Only through these ways can we ______.

①   引出话题。

②   指出该现象存在的问题。

③   指出这已成为普遍的社会问题。

④⑤   分析这一问题所带来的后果。

⑥   承上启下,说明解决该问题的必要性。

⑦⑧⑨   具体阐述解决问题的方法。

⑩   总结全文,使用倒装句强调采取这些方法的重要性。

 

四级写作常用句式

1. 用于描写漫画、图表的常用句型

① As the graph depicts,…

② From the picture we can see that…

③ According to the statistics shown in the first/second graph,…

④ The table shows/indicates/reveals that…

⑤ It can be seen/concluded from the picture/table/figures that…

2. 用于句首提出论点或现象的句型

① Recently,…has become the focus of society.

② …has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life.

③ Nowadays, there is a growing concern for…

④ Nowadays, it is common to hear/see…

⑤ …has become a common occurrence in our daily life.

⑥ Nowadays, more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of…

⑦ It is only during the last/past few years that men have become generally aware that…

⑧ There is an old/a popular saying/proverb that says/goes…

⑨ In recent years, there is a general tendency…

⑩ Nowadays,…has become a problem we have to face.

3. 用于比较、阐述不同观点的常用句型

① Some people like/prefer…, while others feel/are inclined to…

② There are different opinions among people as to…

③ Some people claim that…is superior to… Others, however, disagree with it.

④ Some people believe that… Others maintain that… Still others claim that…

⑤ Some people suggest… Others, however, hold the opposite opinion.

⑥ On the one hand, people tend to… On the other hand, they feel…

⑦ Some people argue that… Others, in contrast, believe that…

⑧ Although more and more people come to believe that…, there are still others who insist that…

⑨ On the contrary, there are people in favor of…

⑩ There are some people who hold different opinions about…

4. 用于陈述个人观点的句型

① My own experience tells me that…

② In my opinion, we should attach more importance to…

③ As for my own idea about…, I believe…

④ As far as I am concerned, I plan to…

⑤ Personally, I prefer…

⑥ In my view, both sides are partly right in that…

⑦ But for me, I would rather…

⑧ My point of view is that…

⑨ In conclusion, I support the statement that…

⑩ As for me, I tend to choose…

5. 用于结尾的常用句型

① From what has been discussed/mentioned above, we may conclude that…

② Therefore, it is not difficult to draw/come to the conclusion that…

③ It is high time that something was done about…

④ From all the reasons/considerations above, it is evident/clear/obvious that…

⑤ Taking all these factors into account, we may reach the conclusion that…

⑥ Given the reasons I have just outlined/discussed/presented, I strongly recommend that…

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