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2020年雅思高分作文精华集锦汇总

学术小学生 2020-08-31 09:34
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  雅思写作一直都是考生们备考的关键,为了方便雅思备考,今天特整理了雅思高分作文精华集锦,希望考生能够从范文中理解写作思路,举一反三,形成自己的写作风格。

  雅思高分作文精华集锦:

  When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To

  what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  官方给出的高分答案:

  Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed. I would like to begin by pointing out that "traditional skills and ways of life" are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community. In many ways, the history of civilization is the history of technology: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the Internet,are of negative impact. Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life. Surely, few people would seek to preserve such traditions as living in caves!

  Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online. In addition, the Internet.

  雅思高分范文解析:

  Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed.(首句话里作者直接说出了自己的观点,这有点不同是中国学生一般所使用的背景开头方式,但它在这个开头中同时使用了两个中国学生不大使用的结构,其一是overall,其二是过去分词做后 置定语,不仅expressed) I would like to begin by pointing out that "traditional skills and ways of life" are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.(作者在这个地方所提出的观点非常的犀利,并且使用的结构也是相当好的, 我们如今可以看一下,I would like to do 我想做...,这个结构是中国学生都是相当熟悉的,但他随后使用的by doing便比较的标新立异,而后他又使用了一个宾语从句,如此结构显得更加丰满了。并且作者对于标点符号的使用也是很特色的,这其中的符号起的作用是加强,大家以后需要注意对于标点符号的使用。另外其中的连词but尽管是很难,但是却是使用的非常恰倒好处。希望考生们能借鉴这样的一种写法。再者其中考官没有使belong to 这样的结构来表示属于,并且很简洁的使用了be of,这代表了简洁的表达受到了考官的关注。更加重要的是作者给出了一 个其中人都不大容易想到的观点,传统的技能与生活方式并非是自然的属于某一个国家的,而是属于某一种文化和区域。

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