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Having read an article about 'smoking and health'. writer smoked the last cigarette.
错误：句尾误用句号导致断句，writer未加冠词和大写，引号多余
修改：Having read an article about smoking and health, the writer smoked his last cigarette.

He didn't smoke for a week and his wife suffered badly.
错误：未体现时间关联，suffered badly口语化
修改：He did not smoke for a week, during which his wife suffered.

Because his bad temper and large appetite.
错误：because引导的片段句，缺主语谓语
修改：This caused his bad temper and large appetite.

Meanwhile, His friends often offered him cigarettes and amused him to see producing a packet of sweets.
错误：his大小写错误，to see producing结构错误
修改：Meanwhile, his friends offered him cigarettes and amused him by producing sweets.

When he went to a party and accepted a cigarette which offered by a friend and since then all thing returned to normal.
错误：which offered被动语态错误，all thing单复数错误
修改：When he attended a party and accepted a cigarette offered by a friend, he resumed smoking.

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