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End of news bulletin.Television announcer showed viewers field-Calabria.
拼写错误field → fields(Calabria 是地区,需复数形式)。
Calabria拼写正确,但连接符使用错误:field-Calabria → fields in Calabria。
End of the news bulletin. The television announcer showed viewers fields in Calabria.

Here macaroni has been growing for over six hundred years.
语态错误:macaroni 是“被种植”,需被动语态 → has been grown。
Here macaroni has been grown for over six hundred years.


This year,harvesting has began earlier than usual.
时态错误:has began → began(过去式)或 has begun(完成时)。根据上下文,过去式更自然。
This year, harvesting began earlier than usual.


The whole village has been working hard day and night so that the crop could be gathering and threshing before September rains.
主被动混淆:could be gathering and threshing → could be gathered and threshed(作物是被收割)。
标点缺失:before September rains → before the September rains(加冠词)。
The whole village has been working hard day and night so that the crop could be gathered and threshed before the September rains.

Then,the crop is processed in factory.
冠词缺失:in factory → in a factory。
Then, the crop is processed in a factory.


After harvest, here is a famous Calabria macaroni-eating competition.
逻辑错误:here is → there is(客观存在用 there is)。
冠词问题:After the harvest。
After the harvest, there is a famous Calabria macaroni-eating competition.

This Signor Fratelli, has won every year since 1991.
语法错误:This → The(特指冠军)。
标点错误:缺少关系代词或连接词。
Signor Fratelli, the current champion, has won every year since 1991.

With that end of bulletin, we are going back to the studio,today is Thursday,1st April.
过渡短语错误:With that end → With that, the bulletin ends。
日期格式错误:1st April → April 1st(英语顺序:月前日后)。
With that, the bulletin ends, and we return to the studio. Today is Thursday, April 1st.

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