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地名等通常首字母大写，如Qingpu Area, Zhujia Corner, Jiangsu Province等。译文Zhujia Coner中，Coner改为Corner。
1. 第一句中，ancient time改为ancient times；rivers across the Qingpu area可以处理为状语，改为On the rivers across the Qingpu Area; flourish 一般不用被动，改为has been flourishing.
2. When引导的从句后面加句子，改为When the county was established...; to 后加动词原形，became改为become；prosper是动词，改为形容词prosperous; 时态保持一致，which have 改为which had.
3. history culture 两个名词不能直接放一起，中间可以加and。
4.因为时间是明末清初，在过去，所以has become the cloth trade center 用过去式，改为became the cloth trade center.
5. with the rice industry was thriving去掉was，通常as后面加句子，with引导伴随状语有几种情况，with加名词；with sth doing （sth和动词之间是主动，如本句中rice industry跟thrive是主动关系）；with sth done (sth和动词之间是被动).
6. boast改为过去式boasted，关系代词who 改为which.
7. diversity是名词，改为形容词diversified.
8. Zhujia Corner always have主谓一致，have改为has; wood改为复数woods。
9. nowadays表示时间是现在，history was gone中，was 改is; is still stands 有两个谓语，可以去掉is。
10. with后不加句子，改为as；Zhujia Corner have already became 改为has already become.
同学下次交作业可以把中文一起贴上，方便助助们对照原文批改哦。
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