同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《Hitalk流利生活口语1v6精品超小班【150次卡】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好哦~
1.When I graduated from university and got my first job，I really  enjoyed buying ...because I  wanted to be looked  very beautiful.
2. It wasted me a lot of money.【my money这里不用my前面已经有me了】
3.Now,I usually spend my money on baby products,housing loan,eating and household products.【spend time/money on sth就可以了】
4.Second,I rarely buy brand name items，I don't think the quality coincides with the price.【这里可以换种表达】
5.I also like do bargaining,I think it is very interesting while I can buy something cheap.【is要有主语】
其他正确！
祝同学学习愉快~