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As developed countries have industrialized themselves on（改成in或者over） the past one hundred years, plenty of natural resource（resources）, particularly energy, has been run out of（改成has run out比较好）. While（while表示转折，这里应该是一个承接，删掉比较好） currently, some developing countries are embarking on industrialization, hence it is necessary to entail more energy as a way to develop economically（后半句都改一下吧~~）.  
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