小作者按照时间顺序讲述了自己在太阳上度过的愉快的一天，向大家展示了自己在太阳上度过的一个美好而神奇的假期。
I'm going to the sun for my
holiday. I will go there by
spaceship. I will
pilot a big blue spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the
super shirt.
我要去太阳上度假。我要乘宇宙飞船去那里。我要驾驶一架蓝色的大宇宙飞船到太阳上。太阳很热。所以我要穿上超级衬衣。
In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast. At eight o'clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes.
早晨，我要吃一些太阳汉堡当早餐。八点的时候，我要跟我的朋友在那里玩耍。他们是超级狗狗和超级女生。超级狗狗是黑白色的。超级女生很聪明。超级女生和超级狗狗都喜欢跟我一起玩。所以我跟他们玩了四十分钟。
Then I do my homework in my little red room at a small blue table. After my homework, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will have red
juice, red fish and red rice.I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. All the things are red.
之后我在红色的房间的一张蓝色的小桌子上做作业。做完作业后，我会吃午饭。我要吃太阳沙拉。我要喝红色的果汁，吃红色的鱼和红色的米饭。我要给太阳宝宝做一些红色的小熊玩具。所有的东西都是红色的。
Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I'll pilot the spaceship to the earth.
因为太阳太热，所以我需要好多的水。所以我回到了宇宙飞船。我要驾驶它飞回地球。
This is a good holiday on the sun.
这是我在太阳上的一个愉快的假期。