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小学英语作文12:我的愿望(含音频)

2015-01-30 | 小蕾
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  • 小花蕾蕾

    非常认真哦~~~see movie → watch movie,其实都可以,see偏向于去影院,watch偏向于在家看

    2012-12-08 18:42 (16) 回复
  • aishiteruu

    我觉得有些用词可以用更好的,也都是小学程度(大概吧)
    比如smoothly → fluently, see movie → watch movie.
    一些小瑕疵:
    I can see English movies and some albums without titles.
    → I can watch and understand English movies without looking at the subtitles and also listen to English albums without referring to the lyrics.
    But he always encourage me and helps me a lot.
    → But he always encourages me and helps me.
    第三段的be可以用become取代。
    欢迎大家对以上评论表达意见!与大家共勉之。

    2012-12-07 18:02 (6) 回复
  • 小花蕾蕾

    现在好了~~~~再看看~~~

    2012-11-20 11:03 (13) 回复

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  • 蓦然回首79791楼

    为什么不能听音频

    2012-11-15 17:42 (2) 回复
  • 小花蕾蕾2楼

    现在好了~~~~再看看~~~

    2012-11-20 11:03 (13) 回复
  • aishiteruu3楼

    我觉得有些用词可以用更好的,也都是小学程度(大概吧)
    比如smoothly → fluently, see movie → watch movie.
    一些小瑕疵:
    I can see English movies and some albums without titles.
    → I can watch and understand English movies without looking at the subtitles and also listen to English albums without referring to the lyrics.
    But he always encourage me and helps me a lot.
    → But he always encourages me and helps me.
    第三段的be可以用become取代。
    欢迎大家对以上评论表达意见!与大家共勉之。

    2012-12-07 18:02 (6) 回复
  • 小花蕾蕾4楼

    非常认真哦~~~see movie → watch movie,其实都可以,see偏向于去影院,watch偏向于在家看

    2012-12-08 18:42 (16) 回复
  • shukanhan5楼

    fhh5ryu

    2013-03-22 17:20 (3) 回复