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2010年镇江中考英语作文题及范文

2011-02-07 21:45
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2010镇江中考英语作文题

七、 书面表达(共1题;满分15分)

请仔细阅读上图,对90后学生普遍具备的优点进行阐述(至少3点),可适当发挥(例如:We are usually fair. We always treat others equally.)。另外,作为一名90后学生,请结合你自己和周围同学的表现,列举至少2点不足之处进行描述。最后,请根据你自己的感悟,对即将开始初中生活的新生提出你的建议。

具体要求:
1、内容包括至少3个优点、2个不足之处和1个建议,可适当发挥。

2、括号内所给例句不得使用。

3、不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。

4、语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,字迹工整。

5、文中不得出现真实校名及姓名。

As post 90s students, we have so many advantages.

范文:

  As post 90s students,we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble,we always give him or her a hand. We are also energetic. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class. In addition,we are abviously imaginative. We always try something new and do everything differently.

  On the other hand,we also have some disadvantages. To tell you the truth,some of us ar a little impolite. Sometimes we can't express our opinions in a correct ways. What's more,we are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives.

  Overall,as post 90s students who will enter a middle school,I think you need to get used to school life as quickly as you can. You should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities. Boys and girls,the future is up to us to createe.

书面表达评分标准

一、 具体要求:

1. 内容包括至少3个优点、2个不足之处和1个建议,可适当发挥。

2. 括号内所给例句不得使用。

3. 不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。

4. 语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,字迹工整。

5. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名。

二、 评分细则:
先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次,然后在该档次内评出分数。

第五档(15~13分)
完全符合题目要求,表达思想清楚,内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇,语言通顺,语意连贯,具有逻辑性。允许个别语言错误。

第四档(12~10分)
符合题目要求,表达思想基本清楚,内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误,但不影响整体理解。

第三档(9~7分)
基本符合题目要求,表达思想不够清楚,内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多,语言欠通顺。

第二档(6~4分)
部分内容符合题目要求,表达思想不够清楚,内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误很多,所写内容难以理解。

第一档(3~0分)
与题目有关的内容不多,不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语,所写内容难以理解。

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