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2010年宜昌中考英语作文题及范文

2011-02-05 11:03
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你的家长或老师可能经常和你谈学习问题。请你叙述一次你的家长或老师对你谈学习的情景、内容以及你的感想。

要求:
1) 不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
2) 内容完整,书写整齐。词数80-100。

范文:
When I was in Grade 7, my English was very  poor. I even couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class. I felt so upset that I wanted to give up English. One day, Mrs. Zhang, my English teacher asked me to go to her office and had a long talk with me. She encouraged me to study English well and gave me some good advice. This helped me a  lot. I became confident from then on and made much progress. I believe my English will be much better in the future.

评分细则:

1. 本大题共15分,  按4个档次给分。评分时先根据短文内容和语言表达的准确程度进档, 然后根据细节确定分数。

2. 按照谈话的情景(4分)、内容(5分)和感想(5分)三个要点赋分。内容部分可用直接引语或间接引语表述。

3. 书写工整1分。词数不够扣3至5分。 使用真实信息的扣2分。      
 
评分档次:

第一档: (13-15分) 能涵盖所有要点, 行文连贯, 语言流畅, 无语法和习惯用法错误。

第二档: (9-12分) 能涵盖所有要点, 行文基本连贯, 语言比较流畅, 但有少量语法和习惯用法错误。

第三档:(5-8分)  能涵盖大部分要点, 但行文不够连贯, 并有少量语法和习惯表达错误。

第四档:(0-4分)  只表达了一、两个要点, 语言错误比较多, 仅有个别句子可读。
 

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