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Through technological innovation and quality control, Chinese enterprises are providing high-quality products in traditional manufactures.
错误：manufactures（商品）≠ manufacturing industry（制造业）
时态、搭配偏口语。
Amid the emerging information technology industry, taught by high-tech and through intensified communication and cooperation with foreign enterprises, they are grappling with upping quality there.
严重中式英语：taught by high-tech、grappling with upping quality 完全不地道。
以高科技为师 不是 “被高科技教”。
grapple with 是 “艰难应对”，贬义，不能用。
Recent years saw China’s government have been establishing legislation and encouraging social surveillance to ensure sound product quality, therefore creating an environment where the whole society values this issue so much.
语法错误：saw…have been establishing 句式杂糅。
用词错误：surveillance 是 “监视、监控”，贬义，不能用。
product issue 表意模糊。

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