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“This summer, however, meant a tourist season boasting not only packed people and bright sunshine but also changed factors.”
“meant” 在此处表意稍显生硬；可以用feature；“packed people” 表述不够自然，“crowds of people”（熙熙攘攘的人群）更符合英语表达习惯；
“Young people, Z generation and undergraduates in particular, are transforming Chinese conventional mobility manner.”
“Z generation” 前缺少定冠词 “the”（“Z 世代” 常用 “the Z generation” 表述）；“undergraduates”（本科生）范围过窄，原文 “大学生” 用 “college students” 更合适；“mobility manner” 表述生硬，“way people travel”（人们出行的方式）更自然易懂。
可改为：Young people, especially the Z generation and college students, are changing the way Chinese people travel.
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