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同学你好~
“attribution” 意为 “归因”，此处应指 “本质属性”。可以改为 “natural nature” 或 “inherent characteristic”
“If they pay primary attention... they would never attract... and then they will instantly face...”
混合使用了 “一般现在时 + 过去将来时 + 一般将来时”，不符合条件句规则，同学如果是想表达虚拟语气，可以改为“If they paid primary attention to ordinary people’s lives, they would fail to attract audiences and face an immediate survival crisis.”要注意虚拟语气的使用规则；
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