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“Some plans targeted to save ecological system are nonplussed with tiny successful vision.”
中“nonplussed” 意思是困惑、不知所措，用词不当，这里想表达 “令人困惑”，用 “confusing” 更合适；
“For example, a plan targets to transform Asia elephants through gene edit technology in order to introduce animals similar with mammoth into Siberia again.”
中“Asia elephants” 应改为 “Asian elephants” ；“targets to” 表述不准确，用 “aims to” 更好；“similar with” 搭配错误，应为 “similar to” ；“gene edit technology” 应是 “gene - editing technology” 。
“The dining habit of these animals maybe restore the inhabitable grassland to the original state before mammoth extermination, increasing sunlight which can reflect to outer space and help seal carbon compound to the soil.”
中“maybe restore” 语法错误，应是 “maybe can restore” ；“inhabitable” 意思是可居住的，此处用词不当，用 “original” 更合适；
“But other events are much more possible to influence ecological system rapidly.”
中“events” 用词不当，这里说的是项目，用 “projects” 更合适；“are much more possible to” 表述不地道，用 “are more likely to” 。
“Rain forests cover 18% surface of earth mainland and offer sanctuary for more than half of mainland animals while coral reef accounts for 0.1 of ocean proportion，where inhabit one fourth marine species.”
中“18% surface of earth mainland” 表述错误，应为 “18% of the earth's land surface” ；
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