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On a fine Sunday, we prepared for a picnic to country.
to country 表达不准确。
句子结构简单，可以更生动一些。
On a fine Sunday, we prepared for a picnic and drove into the countryside.

When driving to the suburb, we found a quiet spot by the river.
quiet spot可以更具体一些。
As we drove into the countryside, we found a quiet and peaceful spot by the river.

Then, we carried the unpacked hampers to the spot.
unpacked hampers 表达不准确，应该是 unpacked our hampers。
句子可以更流畅一些。
修改建议：
Then, we carried our unpacked hampers to the spot and arranged everything comfortably.

We had all arranged ourselves comfortable.
comfortable应该是副词形式 comfortably。
句子结构不清晰。
修改建议：
We had all arranged ourselves comfortably and were ready to enjoy the picnic.

At that time, we had hardly sat down when a few wasps lay on the hampers.
lay时态错误，应该是 landed。
句子可以更简洁。
修改建议：
We had hardly sat down when a few wasps landed on our hampers.

Then, a geat many wasps were flying here.
geat 拼写错误，应该是 great。
here 表达不准确，应该是 around us。
Then, a great many wasps started flying around us.


we efforted to drive them away.
efforted 不是正确表达，应该是 made efforts。
句子可以更生动。
We made efforts to drive them away, but it was no use.

we saw a wasps nest in a tree nearby.
a wasps nest 应该是 a wasp nest。
句子可以更流畅。
修改建议：
Then, we noticed a wasp nest in a tree nearby.

In the meantime, These wasps seized our things and us.
These 首字母不应大写。
seized our things and us表达不准确。
In the meantime, the wasps started attacking us and we seized our things.


we were no way and returned to the Car which was pursued by wasps, drove away there.
we were no way 表达不准确，应该是 we had no choice。
Car首字母不应大写。
修改建议：
We had no choice but to return to the car, pursued by the wasps, and drove away quickly.

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