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“We carried out our democratic surveillance visit” 中 “surveillance” 用词不准确，“民主监督” 常见表达为 “democratic supervision”；“visit” 可改为复数 “visits” ，即 “We carried out our democratic supervision visits” 。
“extensive grassroots communities” 这种搭配不常见，原文 “深入地方” 可简单理解为 “local areas”
“The high - quality development presents the solid theory of the new era.” 翻译可优化为 “High - quality development is the hard truth in the new era.” 。
“adhere to its high - level fulfillment for high - quality development” 表述较生硬，可改为 “adhere to performing its duties at a high level to serve high - quality development ” 。
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