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“The proportion of the women who accept occupational education and skill training have continuously been risen.” 中，主语 “the proportion” 是单数，谓语动词应该用 “has”，而不是 “have”；另外，“been risen” 是错误用法，rise 是不及物动词，不能用被动语态，应改为 “has continuously risen”。
“By adding investment in related fund and improving the system of women educational assistance, the size of accepting occupational education women has been broadened.” 表达不太自然。“the size of accepting occupational education women” 语序有误，可改为 “the number of women accepting occupational education” ；“broadened” 与 “number” 搭配不太恰当，用 “increased” 更合适。
“there were 8.05 million women who have accepted middle occupational education” 中，时态不一致，这里说的是 2014 年的情况，用一般过去时即可，“have accepted” 应改为 “accepted”；“middle occupational education” 表述不准确，“中等职业教育” 常用 “secondary vocational education” 。
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