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同学你好~
1.“We are facing a profound transform in driven force of economic growth now.”
“transform” 通常作动词，此处需要名词 “transformation”；“driven force” 表述有误，应为 “driving force”。
2“The structural reform, as its positive effect and potential keeps releasing, is further facilitating the economic growth for countries.”
“as its positive effect and potential keeps releasing” 结构较为混乱，可改为 “with its positive effects and potential continuously releasing”，用 “with” 复合结构作伴随状语；“for countries” 表述不太准确，可改为 “of countries”。
3“A new round scientific and industrial revolution is gaining momentum, featuring digital economy and sharing economy gaining pace, new industries, models and forms constantly emerging and new growth momentum keeping gathering.”
“A new round scientific and industrial revolution” 缺少介词 “of”，应为 “A new round of scientific and industrial revolution”；“featuring” 后面的几个并列部分结构不太一致且有些繁琐，可改为更简洁的 “with the digital economy and sharing economy accelerating, new industries, models and forms emerging in an endless stream and new growth momentum constantly accumulating”。
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