同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《2023年11月CATTI笔译二级【韩刚签约班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好~
“an unity” 应改为 “a unity” ，“unity” 发音以辅音音素开头，不定冠词用“a”。
“By firmly seizing eyes’ expression, gesture, posture and important details, they give emphasis to distinguish mainstream and branches with elaborately or sketchily appearing” 此句结构有些许混乱，可修改为 “By firmly seizing the expressions of eyes, gestures, postures and important details, they emphasize distinguishing the mainstream and the branches through elaborate or sketchy appearances” 。
“try to convey the protagonist’s facial and gestural emotion while skim their clothing and hats and so on” ，“skim” 使用不当，可改为 “skipping” 。
希望对同学有帮助~