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1.The main melody and rhythm for this time shows change, transform and innovation.
transform是动词，这里应该用名词形式transformation；
下面the grand transform也是如此，应为the grand transformation；

2.featuring highly integrated by increase, transfer and reform
feature+名词或代词作宾语，
这里可以改为featuring integration of increase, transfer and reform

3.both social and government
应为both society and government ；

4.we can see it that
see+宾语从句，直接we can see that即可，不需加it；
a solid foundation for middle-long term fair and sustainable growth is fostered
这里可以用将来时，will be fostered

5.The reform and opening up time which has lasted nearly forty years leave us
注意三单，leaves us
precious experiences 表示“经验”时不可数，不加s；

6.the more complex the situation become
become应为becomes；

the greater change the environment worse这句话助助没有太看懂
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