同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《2023年11月CATTI笔译二级【韩刚签约班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学好
总体上是不错的哦！
1.As the development of scientific and technological revolution and productivity emerged
→As scientific and technological revolution emerged and productivity developed；
2.Only by respecting, adapting and protecting it could allow humanity to realize
→Only by respecting, adapting and protecting it could humanity realize
3.We need create→We need to create
4.we can look forward to see
→we can look forward to seeing
希望对同学有帮助~