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1.考古研究 archaeological research；或者直接说archeology~
2.The objects of archeology researching is中is应当为are，主谓一致；后面substantial materials加s变为复数；
3.through various move acted by ancient human beings这句翻译有点点生硬哈，可以直接说substantial materials of ancient human activities；
4.The derivation of archeology is可以改为archeology derives from...更常见些；
5.Italy是名词，指意大利；形容词是Italian，表示“意大利的”；这里应该是Italy remains；
6.19世纪末20世纪初 in the late 19th and early 20th centuries；
7.spread不规则变化，它的过去分词还是spread，应该是has spread to；
8.“China modern archeology based on fieldwork emerging in 1920s”可改为名词“China modern archeology based on fieldwork's emerging in 1920s”，或改为从句“China modern archeology based on fieldwork emerged in 1920s”；
9.in 1920s缺少定冠词，应该是in the 1920s；下同，of the 1950s，of the 1970s；
10.“在全国范围内广泛开展”可改为extensively developed all over the country；
11.critical progress have been应该是critical progress has been；
12. prompt应为过去式prompted，scads应为scats of；
13.“一个又一个考古奇迹”可以说“Thereby miracles in archeology have been demonstrated to the whole world one after another”；
14.最后一句句式杂糅，这里可以不用contributed to，将 contributed改为were；
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