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1.balancing the relationship between its inheritance and creative development可删去“the relationship between”，直接balancing its inheritance and creative development即可；
最后“General Secretary Xi pointed it out”改为“, as General Secretary Xi pointed out”，和前面变成一句话，会不会和前问衔接更流畅呢？
2.performance侧重于行为方面的表现，“表现形式”可以用expression；yet rich in value可改为with rich value；
current是“现在的”，“时代的”可以译为of the times。“时代特点和要求”不止一个，requirements and features用复数更合适。即requirements and features of the times。
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