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同学你好~
1、 With turmoils in international financial market, which has absolutely impacted on every country.  这句话which引导定语从句，主句是With turmoils，不是完整的句子哦~
2、constantly sluggish副词修饰名词，表述有误哦~
3、修改为constantly sluggish appears in American employment and real estate market as in Japan。
4、第二句话的译文是三个连续的小句子，没有and连词连接。
5、“也关系到”译为link，此类表达较少见，可以简化一下，but also for China's sound and stable economy。
希望可以帮助到你~祝学习愉快~