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同学你好~
Since my serious carsickness, performing as headache and nausea, will inevitably occur on me, the car trip became a torture.
on可以改成to，became改成can often become，这里不是过去时态

From the aspect of the drivers, most of them have experienced a mad time within a traffic jam especially when they are in a hurry to the destination.
From the aspect of the drivers, 可以不说，直接说Most drivers…简洁直接就可以。

It is desperation that the helpless driver is surrounded with.  
这里没必要表示强调含义，可以改成：Helpless drivers are often surrounded by feelings of desperation.

祝同学学习进步~