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同学好，

I think making many videos can earn much money, if you share on the internet (这里你多了一个空格) and get high click rate.

Many people download the video , they will pay money. 这是个很基础但是很严重的错误，注意这是两句话，英语中有一个谓语就是一个简单句了。
Many people download the video. They will pay money.

If someone like it, they will share with friends, colleagues, and relatives.  

Different people has different job.
- 注意主谓一致，have different jobs.

If you want to be a actor , you need to hard working.
- you need to work hard.

Many factors influence it, it depends on your looks and talents .
- it指代的是什么？It depends on your look and talent.

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流量：web traffic

Web traffic is the amount of data sent and received by visitors to a web site. It is a large portion of Internet traffic. This is determined by the number of visitors and the number of pages they visit.

thumbs up点赞
也有网站把“赞”这个按钮标作“like”，所以点赞也可以表达为：
“hit the like button”。

网红： (online) influencer （在网络上）影响力大的人

Have a good evening!