同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《Hitalk流利生活口语1v6精品超小班【150次卡】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好，很高兴为你批改，
1） I feel like I am a kind people，这里可以加个of，a kind of people；
2）I will be happy to help with，这里结尾可以加个him比较完整，即I will be happy to help with him；
3）英文里说话时不用冒号，建议改为逗号，并加个“某某说”，即My friend called me，and he said，”My son is sick,can you help me and give me some suggestions to make him recover quickly?”
4）a few用于修饰可数名词，money是不可数名词，另外建议同个句子时态一致，建议改为although it was a little money,it expressed my heart.

希望可以帮到你哦~