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1. I would like to talk about leisure activities and make plans.【and前后连接并列的两个成分，这里make是省略了to，to talk和to make是并列成分】
2.My life is simple,I do not have too many leisure activities,because I am always busy.【适当结束一个句子，短暂停顿。】
3.When I finish my work ,I usually take my son to the beach nearmy home.【finish这里可以用一般现在时，这句话就是表述一个平时的状态；后面部分可以直接用副词短语，不用从句那么繁琐】

4.When my friend ask me out to have fun,if I really want to go with her,I will tell her”Sounds great ,I would like to”.【引号内的句子，句首单词首字母也要大写，另外sound前面省略的是it/that是个单数的概念，这里要用三单】

5.其他OK
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