同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《新概念英语3、4册连读【随到随学班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好~
out of the oven 这里要加the特指

have a screamed voice可以改成screamed

scream 尖叫
The kids were screaming with excitement.
孩子们兴奋地喊叫着。

You can see that all the money will get back可以改成We will get all the money back.
get back 取回；找回；收回
You have 14 days in which you can cancel the contract and get your money back.
你可在14天之内取消合同，收回钱款。


祝同学学习进步~