同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《大学水平直达CATTI二级（笔译+口译）【三年畅学开学季专享班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

As the economy of Zhujiajiao became increasingly prosperous, its cultural activities presented a colorful picture. Zhujiajiao has always been a land of beautiful scenery / clear waters and magnificent buildings where scholars and intellectuals came forth in large numbers.  Now, what is gone is gone forever, but Mao Tower still stands there as witness to its glorious past. With the change of the times, Zhujiajiao has now developed into a prominent hub of economic and cultural activities.

同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《大学水平直达CATTI二级（笔译+口译）【三年畅学开学季专享班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

As it grew in prosperity with each passing day, its historical and cultural heritage became richer and richer.
At the end of the Ming Dynasty and the beginning of the Qing Dynasty, Zhujiajiao was already a trading center for cotton cloth. With an upsurge of the rice trade afterwards, Zhujiajiao earned the reputation as a supplier of cloth for the whole country and grain and oil for the region south of the Yangtze River.

同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《大学水平直达CATTI二级（笔译+口译）【三年畅学开学季专享班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学好～同学翻译的比较好，基本没什么问题。要注意两点 1. 历史文化含蕴也日渐浓厚漏译。 2. 棉布 应该是cotton cloth。
同学还可以参考一下以下译文：
Facilitated by a network of waterways, overseas trade in Qingpu area has thrived since ancient times. After Shanghai was established as a county-level administration, Zhujiajiao took advantage of Shanghai’s development to flourish into a market town thronged with merchants from all parts of the country among a thousand/ hundreds of many households of residents.