同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《大学水平直达CATTI二级（笔译+口译）【三年畅学开学季专享班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

5. which indicates people around pots can get warm hearts（get warm hearts没有这样的表达）
6. The way people eat not only has symbol but also indicates that people would like to eat from a（应该用冠词the) same pot and share the same destination（destination是目的，用法错误）.
7. Hot pots can be enjoyed by many persons （person一般用于单数，这里换成people）or by one alone.
8. it’s very rare to see one person takes hot pots in hot pots（这里不加s) restaurant …
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同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《大学水平直达CATTI二级（笔译+口译）【三年畅学开学季专享班】》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学好～
1. One can chooses（can后应该用原形choose） raw materials from plates
2. then put them into the hot pots and wait for well-done（well-done用法错误，是形容词）
3. Foods can be eaten when people take them out of the pots and add jams（jams指果酱，用在这里不恰当）
4. The tasty features hotness,softness and fresh.（tasty和fresh都是形容词，用法错误）