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助助帮你看一下——
As is depicted in the picture, around a table sit some young people staring at their smart phones, without any intention to taste the seemingly palatable and nutritious dishes or to chat with each other.
留意一下标点符号和断句，staring ... 处理为后置定语，句子的整合度更高一些。

The impressive picture subtly reveals the duality of the relationship between men and smartphones. 这里都表示泛指，都用复数，不需要加the。
A good many people admit that they are too addicted to smartphones to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. 结合语境，smartphone应该用复数，和主语的数一致，the去掉【表泛指】；或者the改为their。

That’s why some people have lost the skills of direct contact and become alienated from others.
这里skill 用复数，指专门的技能。
Although the smartphone indeed has many obvious advantages，这里表示泛指一类事物，可以用“the+单数名词”。单数名词本身不可以。

With the situation being so serious, it is high time that we enhanced people’s awareness to rectify ...
留意断句和大小写。
To begin with, the mass media, such as radio and the internet, should make efforts to reveal and prevent the negative things. 结合语境，这里应该用复数。
More importantly, everyone, especially young people, is supposed to use the device in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. the 去掉，因为不表示特指“某些年轻人”。

整体很不错～继续加油！

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