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句子首字母大写，标点符号和下一个单词之间空一格

Nowadays,noisy is becoming more and more strong than it was.
noise拼写错误

we all now have to grow accustomed to living and working against a bankground of noisy such as:
noise拼写错误

the noisy of traffic which usually affect us in the streets,the noisy of machines which can suddenly make a enormous Sound in the factories,
这句话注意noise的拼写和sound小写

office equipment including typewriters keyboards printers sounds in the office
可以改成sounds of office equipment like typwriters, keyboards, and printers,  in the office意思重复，可以省略。

and labour saving devices in the home.
in the home改成at home

Even the aero planes which occasionally fly through overhead can bring enormous sounds and affect our daily life.
through可以去掉，fly overhead 在头上飞

In a modern industrial society, hardly any place is free from noise. Especially in cities, the problems is more acute.

Many people who live in cite or town sufferers from noisy have already learned to live against this background of noisy and even don’t seem to be affected.
cities注意拼写，suffer不用单三形式
noise注意拼写

They can endure noisy which is made during their working time and even regard the noisy as a rhythm of back ground.
noise注意拼写

And even they can suffer the noisy which is made in midnight sleeping without any effects.
suffer是“遭受”，这里可以改成bear“忍受”

With the urbanization, we have less and less privacy and silence, and the boom of mechanization makes us haven’t the chance to enjoy the interests of silence.
makes us haven’t the chance 改成deprived us the chance
deprive sb/sth of sth 剥夺；使丧失；使不能享有
Why should you deprive yourself of such simple pleasures?
你为什么连这种简单的娱乐也不让自己享受一下呢？

We seem to be helpless to do anything about work and have come to accept is a one of the more unpleasant features of modern civilization.
accept 后面不该接动词原形is，is前可以加noise

But we can avoid it by going to vocation and escape from the bustle of city temporarily.
vacation拼写错误，escape改成escaping，和going 并列

The more noises it is, the more valuable silence become.
it 改成there，there be句型表示存在有……，becomes单三形式

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