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同学下午好，很高兴为你解答。
1 the conversation of second level is two more than first level
同学出现了手滑，应该是 is too more than

2 my hearing is weakness
改为 hearing is my weakness或者my hearing is weak。
3  answer this question“Yes，she did/No,she did not”.
在question后加with，“用...回答”。
4 I can make a conversation about daily routines or weekend
介词应用on，同学手滑用了or。
5 there are loads of new sentence patterns
改为there are loads of new patterns of sentences。
6  I need learn a lot and read it a few more times and master the whole knowledge.
改为 I need to..., read,,,,and master
主语need to do，然后多谓语并列时，只在倒数第一个和第二个之间加and。

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