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同学上午好，很高兴为你解答。
1 this class was talk about the “simple past tense”，
改为 talked about。
2 .I was so surprised that our foreign teacher speaks Chinese pretty well
注意主谓时态一致。speaks 改为spoke。
3 it’s very fabulous,and she is talkative and talks in a very amusing way.
she was。。。and talked。。。
4 foreign teacher asked us where we went and who was I with last holiday separately
宾语从句使用陈述语序，改为 who I was with
5 and the statue of liberty
自由女神像首字母都要大写。
6 And the other hand
表示顺序时，同学先用了 first ofall，那么接下来要用 second，third。。。
the other hand前常用介词on，并且指两者之间，on one hand、、、on the other hand 一方面，另一方面。
这里使用该词组不合适，建议使用前面的序数词就好。
7 the palace museum and the great wall,
颐和园和长城每个单词的首字母都要大写。


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