Writing(discussion)_沪江网校知识库

Writing(discussion)

网校学员vcz**在学习《Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时》时提出了此疑惑，已有7人帮助了TA。

网校助教

撒哈拉的油菜花

同学你好，该知识点来自沪江网校《Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时》的课程，想要更系统的学习，欢迎进入课程学习。不仅可以和更多的同学一起学习，而且还有老师、助教随时的学习指导和知识点解答哦。

同学你好哦~
1.be funded by 由……资助，这个和同学第一段提出的nationalized国有化还是有区别的。题目表达的意思是，国家来出这部分交通费，民众则免费，国有的话不一定的。而且就中国而言，公共交通系统本身就是国有哦，没有私人的。公交，铁路，航空目前都是国有。【立意方面同学再来斟酌下，下面重点是语法】

2.In this premise,two situations which totally inverse will be analyzed about the new conception in the following paragraphs.【分析出两种不同的状况，可以用被动态，analyze into几乎没有见过这个短语呢】

3.Firstly, if all management of public transportation had already been controlled by government that citizens would have to pay tax with no doubt. 【这里right换成management更恰当，并不是一种权利，确切说是管理】

4.Every employee from transportation system would worry about the incomethat free tickets can not produce any profits. 【应该是担心收入受到影响，不要用中式思维直接翻译“收入问题”其实就是收入】

5.Under the pressure from complaints and financial burden, government have to consider that raises tax to reduce subsidy before long.【句尾加no longer?no longer是不再...的意思，同学是想表达不久之后吧】

6.For producing more profits, companies can choose suitable time to promote service and renew facilities ...【suitable time就可以的，time名词】

7. Instead of anytime, passengers need to choose high-speed train or airplane to travel in a proper season.【这句话和后面的一句话内容不一致呢？大家只能选择合适的时间，那就是大家的选择相对有限，基本是集中出行，那不是容易交通堵塞吗？】

8.As for free, it is not helpful to them.【to对于...来说】
以上，祝同学学习愉快~

网校学员

vcz**

我又来了，估计写到这周三，然后休息。

网校学员

vcz**

In a brief, government takes responsibility to build infrastructures and collects tax. On it's heel, transportation operators must have authorization for running. Passengers have enough choices to go out. As for free, it is not helpful among them.第五段

网校学员

vcz**

On the other hand, competitive way brings a reasonable market to us. For producing more profits, companies can choose suitable timing to promote service and renew facilities with a flexible price strategy. Instead of anytime, passengers need to choose high-speed train or airplane to travel in a proper season. In the end, traffic jams could be prevented by the rule which transportation department changes with big data. 第四段

网校学员

vcz**

Firstly, if all rights of public transportation had already been controlled by government that citizens would have to pay tax with no doubt. Every employee from transportation system faces the income problem that free tickets can not produce any profits. Then service would not be good and operating cost would be expanding quickly for the increasing of passengers day after day. Under the pressure from complaints and financial burden, government have to consider that raises tax to reduce subsidy no longer. Obviously, it is a vicious circle.第三段

网校学员

vcz**

National operating is a kind of monopoly, which can dominate market resources with government power easily. In this premise, following paragraphs will analyze the new conception into two situations which totally inverse. 第二段

网校学员

vcz**

There is a new idea that public transportation such as bus, subway and airplane could be nationalized. Because, this way can provide passengers more discounts or even free. However, I think it is impossible and market competition is the right direction as before.第一段

版权申明：知识和讨论来自课程：《Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时》的学员和老师，如果想了解更多，可以报名参加课程学习。所有知识讨论内容，版权归作者及沪江网校所有。

查看更多知识点

以上知识点和讨论均来自沪江网校，点击了解课程详情

Hitalk 外教1V1口语360课时

免费领课查看详情