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1. Strange apperance and fancy design are both advertisements. 这里面同学是想说“appearance”吗？～另外同学可以参考这样表达是否更清楚：What advertisements show are all strange appearance and fancy design.
2. , first-tier and second tier cities already haven't enough spaces to accommodate ... 这里面haven't同学是想表达时态吗？“没有”我们用的是don't have；这里面助助建议用there be 句型～
例如：I don't have maths and I don't have maths homework.-那天没有数学课，不用做数学作业。
3. Developers have to turn the eyesight to others which own cheaper land price and have loose policy. 同学想表达什么呢？～是否想说：..... and the city without strict estate policy.
4. Then, A part of ... --> 注意大小写
5. we cannot ignore some cheatings could be happened.. --> cheating后面不用加s～另外大作文中尽量不要省略连接词为好，that could happen，happen没有被动语态
例如：We are also aware of some cheating on the celeb vote, and we will disqualify entries if it continues.
我们也在考虑是否有投票作弊的可能性，若这种情况继续下去，我们会对恶意投票方作出相关的处理。
Anything could happen on him at that moment.
在那时任何事都可能发生在他身上。

祝同学学习愉快～

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vcz**

本文属写作，不代表对欠发达地区的实际观点。谢谢。

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vcz**

In my opinion, government should not forbid estate business of strange design in some undeveloped cities. There are no market factors can stop enthusiasm from the residents who want to own a new house nowadays. The responsibility of government is to improve the laws of this field.第四段

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vcz**

However, we cannot ignore some cheatings could be happened among this processing. For example, in order to maximize the profits, a few developers prefer taking risks to use bad quality building materials. Or for sales good, some potential dangerous are hidden by the structure of strange designs. Government must strengthen supervision on these problems.第三段

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vcz**

At last, local government can establish new infrastructure with gathered money.第二段

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vcz**

Strange apperance and fancy design are both advertisements. Because, first-tier and second tier cities already haven't enough spaces to accommodate new buildings nowadays. Developers have to turn the eyesight to others which own cheaper land price and have loose policy. However, it is a merit for less developed areas to develop economy. The reason is that fulfilling a construction project needs a great number of materials and many labours so that local residents have more job opportunities than before. Then, A part of outstanding designs also can attract huge funds to invest.第二段

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vcz**

Construction companys are engaging in designing and creating strange style buildings in a few cities which local government has not enough relevant limited laws. It is not a bad trend unless security of the whole project can not be controlled. Now, I'd like to analyze pros and cons in the following paragraphs.第一段

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